作者vicario837 (維嘉里歐)
看板Eng-Class
標題Re: [請益] 上台要報告的英文稿,求訂正錯誤
時間Mon Dec 16 14:30:50 2013
※ 引述《ga86041 (WWW)》之銘言:
: 大家好
: 小妹大學新鮮人
: 這週六要上台用英文作個簡短的報告
: 大概3~5分鐘,主題是旅遊景點
: 我已經草擬了一份講稿
: 因為是自己的破英文+GOOGLE幫忙
: 還請前輩幫忙訂正訂正>"<
: 英文稿+我的中文原意對照如下:
: Hello everyone, My name is Vivian, Today, my topic is “Angkort”
: 大家好我是薇薇安,今天我的主題是吳哥
: In August this year, I went to Angkor with my father.
: 今年八月我和我爸一起去的
: It was my first time taking a airplane,
an
: and first to visit other country , too
^time countries
: 這是我第一次出國,也是我第一次搭飛機
: Angkor belong to Cambodia, between as Vietnam and Thailand,
s ^ which is (文法沒錯 但這樣比較清楚柬在越泰之間
而不是安)
: 吳哥屬於柬埔寨國,位於越南和泰國的中間
: They are a pool and backward country.
: 他們是很貧窮又落後的國家
It is poor non-industrialized
: Tourism is they largest source of income.
: 旅遊業是他們最大的收入來源
their
: *kid picture:(只是提醒我自己用的)
: (我會在PPT放一張當地小孩的照片)
: Looking at this child, When meet the tourists,
: 看這個小孩,每當他遇到我們觀光客
Look he meets
: they will pointing to the mouth and say“躺鍋”,
: 他們會指著自己的嘴巴說"躺鍋"
he points at his mouth and says
: because they know where are you from,
: 因為他們知道你從哪裡來
you are
: sometime, they may to mistake of you is Japanese,
: 有時候 他們會誤會你是日本人
sometimes x mistaken you for a Japanese
: and say “da ga shi ” I was surprised of that.
: 而說"(糖果的日語發音)" 讓我感到很驚訝
, which made me surprised
: By the way, Cambodians all are thin and black,
: 喔對了 柬埔寨人都是黑黑瘦瘦的
are all DARK!!!
: so they favorite skin white and bit chubby body,
: 所以他們很喜歡白皮膚 又有點胖胖的人
like people with light skins and a bit chubby
: like me, Many times was accosted, really add some confidence for me.
: 就像我這樣 我在被搭訕很多次 真的讓我增加一些信心
I was approached many times and it really made me feel confident.
(accost 不是正面的字)
: not same with Taiwan.
: 跟台灣真的非常不一樣
unlike when I am in Taiwan.
: OK, Let‘s get down to business
: 好了 言歸正傳
: *change picture
: Angkor have a lot of splendor building,
: 吳哥有很多雄偉的建築
has splendid 或 magnificent buildings
: The building neither a palace, nor a prince's mansion.
: 這些建築不是皇宮 也不是王子的住所
s are
: This is a temple, and build begins at 9 Century.
: 他們是神殿 建造於9世紀
They are temples and were built in the 9th century.
: At that time, Angkor is a very powerful and prosperous country,
: 在那個時候 吳哥是非常強大且繁榮的國家
was
: but,by harsh climate cause they perish,
: 但是因為氣候的因素 導致滅亡
but it was perished for harsh climate.
: remain many temple offer peoples of each country to look around.
: 留下這些神殿 提供世界各地的人們造訪
These temples remains and now people all over the world come visit.
: *change picture:
: (放置一些雕刻的照片)
: you can see the Jade carving ,still exquisite and complete after the
undamaged over
a thousand years
: millennium
: 你可以看到這個璧雕 歷經千年仍然精細且完整
: *change picture
: (小吳哥城的照片)
: This is Angkor wat,
: 這個是小吳哥城
: Angkor wat is the most classic also most representative of the temple,
^ ^
: 小吳哥城是最大且最具代表性的神殿
and the all the temples
: where a one, legend is a tower of access heaven, very tall and cliffy,
: 在其 有一座傳說能通往天堂的塔 非常高且陡峭
where according to the legend, there was a tall and steep tower that went
directly to the heaven
: at that time people even believe it is center of universe.
: 當時的人們甚至相信 這就是宇宙的中心
believed was the ^the
: Angkor Wat is a very beautiful place, If you like adventure or ancient
: civilization
: 吳哥是個非常美的地方 如果你喜歡冒險和古文明
: You'll love here.
: 你會愛上這裡的
: Next time,
: I want to go Mayas and Egypt, I really like the remains.
Maya 應該不是個地方
: 下一次 我還想去馬雅和埃及 我真的非常喜歡遺跡
: Thank you for you attention
your
: 先謝謝大家了!!!
(擦汗)
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