Yeah, the sentence is too long...
and the part where you said (This) is becuase that (it) can move ....
is very confusing...
(What) is becuase that (what) can move relevant files??
as long as the indications of the pronouns are clear, the "as well as" part
of the sentence should be fine...
This is because t
hat it can move relevant files around to each other in order to reduce the amo
unt of time searching fragmented files all over the hard disk as well as exten
ds a durability of a hard disk.
※ 引述《robbie0529 (Robbie)》之銘言：
: The Defrag utility in Windows OSes is a utility that helps to organizes fragmented files or data in a volume in order to gain performance. This is because that it can move relevant files around to each other in order to reduce the amount of time searching fragmented files all over the hard disk as well as extends a durability of a hard disk.
: This is one of my assignments, the part I'm not sure is that do I use the" as well as " correctly? Cuz the sentence seems too long and redundant to me。appreciate for the help.
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