作者loveuk (Just do it)
看板Eng-Class
標題[請益] 請問文法是否有誤呢？
時間Fri Oct 3 15:31:37 2014
打了2個問題，
不知文法或內容是否怪怪的(文不對題之類)，
就拜託大家幫我看看唷~
先謝謝拉~
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問題一：
What events in a person's life are most celebrated in your country?
回答：
Taiwanese people celebrate in many events.
When parents have a newborn baby in Taiwan, they will have a
small feast.
If getting married, couples will have a feast, too.
In my opinion, in Taiwan wedding and having a baby are most celebrated in a person's
life.
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問題二：
2. What about the significance of gifts, are there particular presents that
are given on particular occasions?
回答：
In Taiwan, children get birthday cake from their parents to present their
happiness and wish children safe and well.
Take myself as an example, I got some beautiful flowers from my students in
their graducation ceremony to present their thanks.
I mean, gifts often present the givers feel grateful and delighted.
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※ 編輯: loveuk (114.37.227.109), 10/03/2014 19:12:47
推 Ichbinyy: 你打完有自己先看過一次嗎？ 10/03 23:00
→ Ichbinyy: "I mean, gifts are ..."這句也... 10/03 23:17
→ Ichbinyy: Take myself as an example ...我覺得會比較好。 10/03 23:22
→ Ichbinyy: 第一段的結論來得有點莫名。 10/03 23:24
→ Ichbinyy: [parents give pupils...]這邊我覺得也應該要改一下... 10/03 23:26
→ Ichbinyy: [If getting married, newlywed couples...] newlyed 10/03 23:31
→ Ichbinyy: couples 是已婚了> <,前面是將要結婚> < 10/03 23:32
謝謝I大~ 是我粗心了，已修改完，這樣看起來還OK嗎? ^^
非常感恩您寶貴的建議~
※ 編輯: loveuk (36.224.171.61), 10/04/2014 00:21:51
→ dunchee: 1. 你的回答算是文不對題。問題問的是"most celebrated" 10/04 00:40
→ dunchee: ，但是你的回答過於模糊/一般性。"General speaking"意思 10/04 00:41
→ dunchee: 過於廣泛(和most celebrated沾不上邊)。commemorate 也無 10/04 00:41
→ dunchee: 法表達"events ... most celebrated"的意思(不是most 10/04 00:41
→ dunchee: celebrated的events照樣可以用commemorate來表示)。之後 10/04 00:41
→ dunchee: 你「隨便」舉3個例子也於事無補 10/04 00:41
→ Ichbinyy: commemorate 及物動詞... "with object" 10/04 00:46
→ MADAOTW: 感覺像是ibt的speaking 10/04 01:07
是speaking沒錯^^~
謝謝樓上幾位，我改了一些句子，這樣有比較改善麻?~^^ 感謝大家
我想得很認真啦，沒有亂舉例的意思，
若有人這樣問我，我想我會這樣回答~^^ 不洽當之處，就拜託大家多指教啦~
※ 編輯: loveuk (114.37.227.11), 10/04/2014 13:16:49