[請益] 關係子句又含關係子句

[snob2 (ggg)]

請問,

     My boss, who worried about me, who is a careless man,
     can't take the responsibility of the position,
     supported another staff, who is more prudent,
     as the supervisor.

     寫這種句子
     使用英語的人士看得習不習慣
     還是拆成兩三句較佳


     謝謝



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推 SuperW: 這個句子有點慘  你原本中文是想表達甚麼?
→ dashihito: 猜原po講的三個人：一位擔心我能力的老闆、粗心大意的
→ dashihito: 我、較謹慎的同事。所以是我的話，我會改寫成：My boss
→ dashihito: worried that I, a careless man, couldn't take the
→ dashihito: responsibility of the position, supporting another
→ dashihito: more prudent staff member to be the supervisor.