推 xpasser:"I was graduated" should be "I graduated" 06/14 22:41
推 army:"if it is", "and me", "good-smelling" (or change wording) 06/14 22:53
推 afl5b:Thanks. I know how to deal with it! 06/14 23:22
※ 引述《afl5b (鳳梨)》之銘言：
: Hello everyone
: Please check my grammer and fluently.
fluency? you want to say this word?
: I wrote it by myself, but I don't know is it good or not!
it is
: Thank you all
: ========== My introduction are as follow. ==========
: Hi there, I'm Kevin, I'm very happy to introduce myself and attend this
: interview.
: My home is located in Taoyuan and there are 4 people in my family including
: my father mother younger sister and I. I was graduated from Lan Yang
: Institute of Technology majoring in English! My hobby is collecting the
: products of Coca Cola and model cars. Now, I'm a barista in McCafe. I've
: working there for about a year. So I can make a cup of good smell coffee!
I've worked
: Thank you for your attention.
: ========== That's all ===========
: By the way, when I finish my conversation, can I speak " That's all"
: If can't, what should I say?
: Thank you all.
I think
Thank you for your attention is enough :p
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