[Ask ] Inspiration Emergency

[lavaever (達西太太)]

Dear friends on EngTalk,


Oh....I need inspiration really bad.
There's an essay on natural disaster which should be turned in this Wednesday
morning.
I want to write about earthquakes in Taiwan.
But that is jsut a vague idea. I must have a specific thesis statement.
Somebody help me develope it, please> <

There should be five paragraphs: introduction, 3 developmental paragraphs
and conclusion.

for the introduction part, I think I'll have a funnel start, talking about
all natural disasters then focus on earthquakes in Taiwan.
as to the conclusion, I want to remind people that
we can't avoid earthquakes but we can decrease the casualty.

and there are still 3 paragraphs left. What am I going to do???

Come to me, inspiration!
O Muse, sing for me the ideas for this essay.


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推 Bigfatty73:start from the actual hazards and how it shapes
→ Bigfatty73:our daily life (passively), then describe it
→ lavaever:so u mean, forget about the funnel start and use
→ lavaever:dramatic start instead?
推 Bigfatty73:nah, that'd be my start. Think of it as an add-on
→ lavaever:I see.