→ paralupi:Thanks Kassity.Typo[Coner->Corner].Her writing is 09/06 02:28
→ paralupi:is fine but usually it's better using different word 09/06 02:29
→ paralupi:and varied ways of sentense. 09/06 02:29
※ 引述《paralupi (Champs-Elysees)》之銘言：
: First I thank you being opend to any one's suggestion
^
for
: on your writing, and I can run out my last nerve to fall
: sleep sooner later.
: ※ 引述《water6855 (sherry)》之銘言：
: : Hello, I'm Sherry. I am a beginner of ptt. Please correct me if there's
: : any problem or mistake.(Using word "problem" sounds strange here.)
: -->Dear all of the "English Chat" board, I'm glad to post notes here
: in English and introduce myself. My name is Sherry and just start using
: P.T.T. a minute ago. Feel free to correct my writing or drop an note with
: diffrent suggestions.
I don't see too many "problems" with her original writing. Afterall, she
asked to be corrected rather than re-written in an affected way.
: : I felt so great when I saw this board. I'm quite interested in English and
: : have learned it for years. It's very grateful to see everyone here is same
: : as me. I hope I can have fun time here, and make lots of freinds as well.
I was excited to find this board. I'm quite interested in English and
have studied it for years. I'm very happy to see that everyone here shares
the same passion. I hope I'll have a good time and make a lot of
friends.
: -->I'm excited to find such coner for people who are passionte in English
: as me and want to improve English skill. Also I hope for good time while join
: this group and get to know many friends as well.
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※ 編輯: Kassity 來自: 209.220.14.24 (09/06 01:39)