[Ask ] I need some help on the sentence

[waterfire (嘿嘿)]

Dear. all

I want to rewrite this paragraph :


" The radio frequency (RF) and wireless market has suddenly expanded to
unimaginable dimensions. Devices such as pagers, cellular and cordless
phones, cable modems, and RF identification (RFID) tags are rapidly
penetrating all aspects of our lives, evolving from luxury items to
indispensable tools."


This paragraph is copied from a reference, I want to write it into
my essay for statement of purpose, but, I afraid of causing plagiarism.
I try to rewrite it, but, however, the words selected of this paragraph
are too excellent to substitute which I have no ability to adapt.

Could someone help me rewrite it?

I really need the help, thank you very much.

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推 djviva:Asking someone to "reconstruct" this paragraph for your
→ djviva:own need, isn't it another kind of piracy?
→ djviva:If what you are concerned is your English ability isn't
→ djviva:good enough, how about write down your idea about this
→ djviva:article in Chinese first, and try to rewrite it in Eng?
→ djviva:and then ask someone to improve?