Re: [Talk] Hello everyone

[devildennis (Audio Day Dream)]

Hi Edward,
Nice to meet you, too.

I'd like to share a suggestion as per your request :P
please see below.

※ 引述《eda730306 (EDA)》之銘言：
: Hello everyone. Good evening!
: My name is Edward from Kaohsiung.
: This is my first post here. My english is poor. I wish you can understand.
: First, I like this place that I can study and improve english ability.
: Though, my english is not good enough. But, I will try to talk or write something.
: Second, if my post have any wrong grammar, words, you can give me some suggestion.
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I think this better be like:
If there is anything wrong with the grammar or words in what i posted, please....

It's like a common mistake that we all might have sometimes.


: I will very happy what I wrong and improve it.
: Of course, I will keep myself to pratice more post here.
: Finally, I wish everyone have a good night. :)


Ok, now it's my turn to ask a question.
If there is anyting wrong with the grammar or words in my re-post, please be
kind to let me know.  >///<


Thank you in advance.

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推 hahastarr:I didn't read the whole thing but glanced through
→ hahastarr:the last few lines. There's something I wanna point
→ hahastarr:out. Generally, people don't HAVE a mistake, they
→ hahastarr:MAKE a mistake. Also I don't think 'might' is
→ hahastarr:necessary here. Other than that, the last thing you
→ hahastarr:ask is not really a question, it's more like a favor
→ hahastarr:to me.
→ devildennis:thank you hahastarr!!  i will note them down!!