Hello,
I can see a certain depth in your brief writing. I cannot see a purpose for
such writing. If you just want people to comment on your level of english
then i could say that you have a certain level.
Realistically if i was you i would practise on practical form of writing.
The difference between english and chinese is that english want simplicity
and chinese want complex. For someone who understand the european culture
this writing wouldn't be something they like. So my golden advise is to
keep the flower language and jaw-breaking words limited to chinese.
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