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any problem with the sentence?

"A lack of experience writing in composition was many students' problems
 whom learn the English."

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→ Dinotopian:Lack of experience in writing composition is the
→ Dinotopian:main problem for student who learn english
→ toputitina:"For English Learner, lacking writing experience
→ toputitina:on composition is the main problem."    could this?
→ tengharold:I like Dino's version better, but I would use:
→ tengharold:...composition writing... for English learners.
→ kent1021:I thought the word "composition" already include the
→ kent1021:meaning of "writing something"