Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr> writes:
> On 2005-09-15 06:23, Tom Rhodes <trhodes@freebsd.org> wrote:
>> -.Pa /etc
>> +.Pa /etc/rc.d
>
> Nice catch :)
Maybe want both. On my 5.4 sys:
/etc/pccard_ether:if [ -r /etc/defaults/rc.conf ]; then
/etc/pccard_ether: . /etc/defaults/rc.conf
/etc/pccard_ether: . /etc/rc.conf
/etc/rc.bsdextended: . /etc/defaults/rc.conf
/etc/rc.bsdextended: . /etc/rc.conf
/etc/rc.firewall: . /etc/defaults/rc.conf
/etc/rc.firewall: . /etc/rc.conf
/etc/rc.sendmail: . /etc/defaults/rc.conf
/etc/rc.sendmail: . /etc/rc.conf
/etc/rc.subr: . /etc/defaults/rc.conf
/etc/rc.subr: . /etc/rc.conf
Or do I have some old files in there?
>> +Configuration variables which control network services such
>> +as NFS are defined below:
>> +.Bl -tag -width indent-two
>
> I think "such as NFS" should be inside a pair of commas here.
Some wouldn't. It's fine either way, IMO. When I say it out loud, I
pause only after "NFS", but it seems wrong with only one comma.
(I subscribed to alt.usage.english yesterday after 3 years or so, to
maybe ask about such things, but was disappointed to see them 90% off
topic. I'll have to lurk a while before trusting them again.)
> IMHO, it's also a bug to
> start the line with a capital letter when a displayed block is 'inlined'
> somewhere in the middle of a sentence.
Yes, and something to watch for, it seems; I fixed one yesterday.
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