Re[2]: docs/93014: minor nits in the project model book (dev-model)

Halo Giorgos,

Friday, February 10, 2006, 4:30:14 PM, si tukal:

> The following reply was made to PR docs/93014; it has been noted by GNATS.

> From: Giorgos Keramidas <[e-mail]>
> To: Ben Kaduk <[e-mail]>
> Cc: [e-mail]
> Subject: Re: docs/93014: minor nits in the project model book (dev-model)
> Date: Fri, 10 Feb 2006 17:23:52 +0200

>  On 2006-02-08 03:56, Ben Kaduk <[e-mail]> wrote:
 >> In the project model book, I found a few minor nits whilst perusing
 >> its contents.
 >>
 >> One nit is the use of "to" instead of "too" on line 2209 of the source.
>  
 >> >Fix:
 >> --- book.sgml   Wed Feb  8 02:38:24 2006
 >> +++ book.sgml.orig      Wed Feb  8 02:38:08 2006
 >> @@ -2206,7 +2206,7 @@
 >>                      stability cannot be sacrificed by self-imposed deadlines and
 >>                      target release dates.
 >>
 >> -                    For slips of time not to become too long with regards to security
 >> +                    For slips of time not to become to long with regards to security
 >>                      and stability issues,
 >>                      extra discipline is required when committing changes to -STABLE.
>  
>  Hmmm, not really.  The original text is ok.  "too long" refers to the
>  length of a time period.  I'm not sure what "to long" would mean here.
>  

looks okay to me too.

-- 
Cheers,
   Daniel Gerzo

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