Quoting keramida@FreeBSD.org:
> - <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability;
> - that tells <application>LPD</application> to open the printer in
> - read-write mode.</para>
> + <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability.
> + When this capability is present, <application>LPD</application>
> + opens the printer in read-write mode.</para>
>
> Does this look better?
I guess we should avoid the repetition of "capability", though (the fdp-primer,
"writing style" invites us to).
What do you think of something like: " When present, it tells LPD to open the
printer in r/w mode".
My, I'm starting to feel like a fussy guy, now... :-\
(By the way, I read the "that" as a relative, and did not realise the ";" could
be used to separate the two sentences and make "that" a demonstrative).
gregory
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