Re[2]: docs/119463: [handbook] [patch] typo in printing/chapter.sgml

Hello Warren,

Tuesday, January 15, 2008, 12:02:32 AM, you wrote:

> On Mon, 14 Jan 2008, [e-mail] wrote:

>> Quoting [e-mail]:
>>
>>
>>> -        <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability;
>>> -          that tells <application>LPD</application> to open the printer in
>>> -         read-write mode.</para>
>>> +        <para>You should also specify the <literal>rw</literal> capability.
>>> +         When this capability is present, <application>LPD</application>
>>> +         opens the printer in read-write mode.</para>
>>>
>>> Does this look better?
>>
>> I guess we should avoid the repetition of "capability", though (the fdp-primer,
>> "writing style" invites us to).
>> What do you think of something like: " When present, it tells LPD to open the
>> printer in r/w mode".
>> My, I'm starting to feel like a fussy guy, now... :-\

> <para>You should also include the <literal>rw</literal> capability so
>    <application>LPD</application> opens the printer in read-write mode.

Maybe something like:

<para>The <literal>rw</literal> capability should be also included in
  order to let <application>LPD</application> to open the printer in the
  read-write mode.</para>

-- 
Best regards,
 Daniel                            mailto:[e-mail]

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