Re[2]: docs/119463: [handbook] [patch] typo in printing/chapter.sgml

On Tue, 15 Jan 2008, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
> Tuesday, January 15, 2008, 12:02:32 AM, Warren Block wrote:
>
>> <para>You should also include the <literal>rw</literal> capability so
>>    <application>LPD</application> opens the printer in read-write mode.
>
> Maybe something like:
>
> <para>The <literal>rw</literal> capability should be also included in
>  order to let <application>LPD</application> to open the printer in the
>  read-write mode.</para>

That's a little passive, although I agree with removing "you should". 
Let's make it imperative:

<para>Include the <literal>rw</literal> capability so 
<application>LPD</application> will open the printer in read-write mode.

-Warren Block * Rapid City, South Dakota USA
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