[問題] pp3 sc_230

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Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the
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peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof
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was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first
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Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
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正確答案是D  但不太了解原句錯在哪裡   請教各位  謝謝!

A. 原句

B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about
   the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma
   Lagerlof in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish
   writer that won


C. Selma Lagerlof was a novelist who turned away from literary realism
   to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of
   northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition
   to the first Swedish writer winning


D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic
   stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden,
   Selma Lagerlof became in 1909 the first woman and also the first
   Swedish writer to win


E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlof turned away from literary realism
   and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape
   of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also
   the first Swedish writer that won

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