[語文] pp2-29

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29。  Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the focal
point of urban life, the river in San Antonio winds through the middle of the
business district, and the River Walk, or Paseo del Rio, is the city's most
popular attraction.

(A) Unlike many United States cities, where a river is no longer the
focal point of urban life, the river in San Antonio
(B) Unlike the river in many cities in the United States,
which is no longer the focal point of urban life,in San Antonio the river
(C) Today the river in many cities in the United States is no longer
 the focal point of urban life, unlike San Antonio, where it
(D) In few United States cities today, a river is the focal point of
urban life, but the river in San Antonio
(E) No longer do many cities in the United States have a river as the
focal point of urban life, but in San Antonio the river

答案E.

請問B除了which就近指代United States錯誤,有其他錯誤嗎？
which是允許跳躍修飾the river的,所以我很難只因為which就近指代這個指控就把他排除
還是說which離指代的對象太遠了呢？

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推 KGChen:個人意見後面改成the river in San Antonio會比較對比一點
推 tootoobenee:Unlike A,B結構下, 主詞馬上接在逗號後面,不要在插入
→ tootoobenee:介係詞片語, 會讓比較對象不明確, 這個老莫有說過.