推 webelieve:答案是D嗎?! C的話是平行錯吧~ 11/16 22:02
→ webelieve:原句in its firsthand accounts (in +名詞) 11/16 22:06
→ webelieve:對等連接詞後應該也用介系詞+N比較好~ 11/16 22:07
→ pilichat:但是功能相同的介詞可省 11/16 23:06
→ pilichat:正確答案是D沒錯！只是想知道C是有錯～還是只是比較不好 11/16 23:10
Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was
unprecedented in its firsthand accounts of the indignities suffered
by women and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and
criticizing these indignities.
A.and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing
B.and in that it was eloquent and passionate when exposing and criticizing
C.as well as the eloquence and passion it had in exposing and criticizing
D.and in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized
E.but also its eloquent and passionate exposure and criticism of
請教一下C怎麼錯？
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