[語文] PP3-190

[marsis (就是任性!)]

The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as
                                                         ———————
commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written
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charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
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A. some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each
   had a written charter
B. some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all
   of which had written charters
C. some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all
   had written charters
D. with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens,
   all had a written charter
E. with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens,
   each had a written charter

答案是A

我想請問一下, 為何A句彼此間都不用連接詞啊?
另外, 可以幫我分析一下E選項嗎?

謝謝~~



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推 fleuve:因為The thirteen original...each had a written 的had
→ fleuve:是整句的主要動詞..
→ fleuve:some...others...是修飾British colonies
→ fleuve:E的結構就很明顯沒有A漂亮啦~
→ fleuve:如果把with去掉可能就OK
推 duomaxlee:同意樓上 DE有with我看到會直接打槍 bc是一看就有問題
→ duomaxlee:b的being c的that(缺be動詞 were?)formed