[[Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work
both rooted]] in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke
Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
A. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of
work both rooted
B. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work
that was rooted both
C. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work
rooted
D. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was
rooted
E. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted
both
OA:D
A)both...and..沒有平行
B)除了both...and...沒有平行之外, 還有甚麼考點嗎? 是因為跟D相對比起來比較
不簡潔?
C)主語和who之間不需要逗號(any others?)
D)correct
E)both..and沒有平行
請問各位還有其他需要注意或修改的嗎??? 這樣解題思維對嗎?
謝謝!!!
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