[討論] Georgia, I Love!

[killaboom (Dman)]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5X6ad9zqBCU

這首歌詞太屌了!
而且還是寫喬治亞幹我快哭了!!!

(歌詞)

Georgia, My state my home

For 17/ years/ learned right/ from wrong/
Cried saline/ tears/ when i write/ these poems/
As I "made these"/ fears/ give flight/ to song/

這三句斜線的地方是押韻的地方
其中從"Se"ven"teen"變"sa" "line"再轉成"made" "these"
這邊就很扯了

year/ tear/ fear和right/ write/ flight和wrong/ poem/ song本來就同音不用講
不過這三句壓這麼多韻就很扯了


The red clay stains the soles/ of my shoes/

The red clay stained the soul/ of a fool/

My grandparents told me the goal/ that you choose/

一樣是壓很多韻
接下來就是"比較"普通的雙運部分我就省略了

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.
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So when i think back to the clay that raised me

I thank God for the strong man it made me

這兩句太感人了...

Georgia I love!

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