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IELTS Writing
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table as follows presents statistics showing the aspects of
quality of life in five countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main
features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
You should write a minimum of 150 words.
Country
GNP per head (1982: US dollars) Daily calorie supply per head Life expecta
ncy at birth (years) Infant mortality rates (per 1,000 live births)
Bangladesh 140 1,878 40 132
Bolivia 571 2,086 50 124
Egypt 690 2,950 56 97
Indonesia 581 2,296 49 87
USA 13,160 3,652 74 12
The table provided unfolds the detailed information of four aspects
of quality of life in five different countries, in which those aspects
include GNP per head, daily calorie supply per head, life expectancy
at birth, and infant mortality rates.
Among these five countries, in the first three categories, the
USA has the largest numbers while in the fourth one, infant mortality
rates, the lowest. In detail, concerning GNP per head, the USA
has the overwhelming number of 13,160, and Egypt occupies the
second place, at 690, nearly one twentieth of the figure of America
; still, Bangladesh ranks the lowest, 140. Amazingly, there are
nearly similar numbers between Bolivia and Indonesia, 571 and 581 respectively
. In the second category, daily calorie supply per head,
the figure of the USA surpassed slightly more than that of Egypt
(3,652 and 2,950), whereas ensued by the other countries,
Indonesia, Bolivia, and Bangladesh (2,296, 2,086, and1,878).
Furthermore, adverting to the third facet, the trend is analogous
to those statistics depicted in the previous items. The life
expectancy at birth in Bangladesh is about 40, ranking the lowest
country on this table; on the other hand, as our prophecy the
highest life expectancy for people is the USA, at 74, roughly
doubling the life span of Bangladesh. Plus, the life expectancy in
Egypt, Bolivia and Indonesia is 56, 50, 49 individually. Compared
with the information in the former three ones, statistics in the last
one, illustrate a squarely reverse direction, from Bangladesh to the
USA, the infant mortality rates presenting steady gradations from
132 to 12. The figures limpidly divulge the truth: the more civilized,
the lower infant mortality; perhaps the poor sanitation and paucity
of dietary nutrient caused by the low calorie supply are responsible
for this phenomenon.
Based on the information analyzed above, we can explicitly
fathom that the GNP, the daily diet ingested and life expectancy
hinge properly on the extent of civilization in a country; by contrast,
the less developed, the higher rates of infant mortality.
In comparison with other countries, America enjoys higher and more
civilized living standards.
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