推 astrotin:時態 09/08 01:06
推 metea:可麻煩幫我修改一下媽?感激~~ 09/08 01:23
Leon is waked up by his father on seven-thirty in the morning. They have a
plan on this holiday--have a picnic in the park today. First, they arrive the
park, Leon's mother brings a lot of food, drinks for them. They sit on grass
and enjoy these delicious food. In the afternoon , Leon and his father play
frisbee, his sister fly a kite. They will been happy a day.
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