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這是課堂作業的一個短文
內容是寫我去大陸玩
想請問有沒有什麼真的太嚴重的文法錯誤呢??
Last summer vacation, I travel to China and stayed my sister’s
house a month. Before I back to Taiwan, I travel to Hong Kong for 3 days
with my sister, sister’ husband and they baby. We stayed in the Prudential
Hotel in Jordan on Nathan Road. It’s near Temple Street, Ladies Market,
Harbor City, Lang-ham Place and a lot of famous spots and very convenient.
Mass Transit Railway (MTR) is convenient in Hong Kong. So we can take
the MTR to anywhere and just spend in a minutes. There is very large,
clean and the signpost is very clearly. When we took it from Tsim Sha Tsui
station to Central station, I was almost lost in there with my family.
It’s very funny and thrilling.
When you to go to Hong Kong, you must try a piece of Hong Kong waffle.
That small booth sells Hong Kong waffle in Nathan Road too. It’s near
our hotel. Because it was a lot of magazine and news reported and
celebrity’s introduction, so we bought it in there. It’s really
delicious under our expectation and the texture is very different than Taiwan.
Night scenes of Hong Kong are three top in the word. We took the
peak tram to Peak Tower to saw the view and I’m deeply touched
by it. There is Madame Tussauds Hong Kong on the Peak Tower’
downstairs. It’s so expensive, so we didn’t enter there and only took
some photos in outside. I hope I can to go in there next time.
This time, we just went to a few spots in Hong Kong, so I hope
I can go to more spots in there next time.
大半夜勞煩各位了! 感謝!
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