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    My name is XXX, 25-year-old, a total of five members of the family,

 and my older sibling. Parents today are in addition there are two sisters

 engaged in electronics related industries.

    I graduated from XXX, I am majoring in electronics and telecommunications,

 are in favor of individual areas of expertise in hardware,

 in the junior college I majored in motor control, communications,

 teaching practice in schools in access to more electronic circuits,

 as well as the system simulation. Compared to the same period although

 the students will have the majority of people still continue to

 post-graduate research institute in this regard,

 but I myself in the hope of immediate-early accumulation

 of social experience. In studying this period,

 I had worked together with fellow students DOH Keelung Hospital,

 a volunteer, where to understand that health, family is precious,

 which I can not learn in school to understand the.

     My personality is very outgoing, but under slow heat type,

 at the beginning with people who do not know,

 and there is not much to talk about with words,

 once familiar with each other,

     I can have good interaction with other people,

 some of the more intellectual conversation things .

     I love sports anything, including softball, table tennis, bowling

 are all I love sports. In my current job in terms of learning attitude

 is to learn more, see more, ask, while still young to learn,

 the more we can have more to learn a little.

     Currently in a semiconductor packaging company as a maintenance

 technician position, the main job duties

 1 ‧ excluding machine problems and the implementation of routine

      preventive maintenance

 2 ‧ involved in engineering courses, such as the installation of machines,

     cost reduction, quality and productivity improvements and thus increase

     the capacity of companies and individuals.

     Over the next few years, I still hope to have more contact and learn

 a wider range of work experience and enhance their foreign language ability.

 All I have for the future is full of expectations and optimism,

 are also actively work and face the next challenge.


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