[Presentation] comment from our guest judges 1.

[imsinyu ()]

ART
-the beginning is a little confusing
-good explanation
-maybe your presentation is trying to present too much, however, the idea of having the grand father is good
-don’t read cue cards
-smooth transition between scenes
-like the creativity in the presentation
-the speeches are not memorized
-should have more eye contact
-kind of hared to hear some people
-cute appearance of dindinn dongdon
-videos used to introduce new topic, interesting
-demonstration of yoyo is good
-talking among selves when should face audience
-reading off words






FOOD&DRINK
-skits poses
-presentation as if serving introducing food
-well-prepared/memorized
-“judged” the food
-tittles fo food presentations are nice
-few grammatical errors
-the nannies are cool
-the main speaker should be more clearly
-have some one check your speeches for grammar word usage issues
-the flow of your presentation could be a little smoother (but good job, I like your performance)
-well-prepared, would be better if not that nervous
-a few grammatical errors in t e speech
-very creative with the dish name





FOLKS
-informative presentation
-reading off words
-simple ppt, easier to pay attention
-well-informed
-some slides have too much info creamed on it
-reading off slides(not fair that “narrator” is readingoff words when everyone else is memorize lines)
-flow needs work
-your topic is controversial eh?
-what about a way to link the different part of your present?
-American and Europe have bbs too>  <
-your should have given US an outline of what you would….
-good premonition (girl in front of the computer)
-transition not smooth enough, some awkward moment, more preparation would make it better
-power point very detailed and clear, but adding some pictures would make the power point more interesting





HOLIDAY
-fireworks! Ya!
-monster chasing cute
-showing instead of just telling good
-make sure you can be seen when performing
-you guys are funny
-the monster was a little…….
-I was save candy
-this presentation was great
-few grammatical errors
-well memorized, very prepared
-good illustration in the power point









HISTORY&GEOGRAPHY
-very well-prepared, speech well-memorized
-too many word on slide, which makes presenter read off it too much and therefore no eye contact with audience
-no note cards though so that’s good
-good eye contact from some presenters
-could be more creative with the power point
-power point didn’t capture attention
-thorough and detailed presentation on Taiwan
-good eye contact and presentation skills
-and person also has good interacts with audience
-spelling problem








INDUSTRY
-very lively speech presentation
-grammar can improve
-outstanding slides
-good transitions (story connects)
-too many pictures of betel nut girls…
-voice loud and audible
-very creative, funny and interesting
-capture audience’ attention
-good transition between scenes
-would be better if memorized the speech and not directly reading the power point
-good try at a different topic
-bicycles are pretty cool
-awesome transitions!!!
-you=cool!




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※ 編輯: imsinyu         來自: 220.137.85.136       (12/20 00:59)
推 ujoy:too many pictures of betel nut girls…好好笑XDDDD
推 warmleaf:push~~~everyone did a good job!
推 boq50:yeah~sorry for my picture"s".
→ boq50:I was so high that I can't stop finding those nasty.....
推 Recorder:I thought the pictures must be your collections.....
推 ryan0601:Ithink soXD(shake hands with upstairs)
推 boq50:No~you wrong~they now become my collections.
推 ryan0601:文法錯成這樣 你還是趕快去修進階英文吧= =
推 boq50:It's colloquialism. You don't understand!!
推 Ben5461:應該是修初級英語...
推 giannilou:all of you did really well~that's awesome^^
推 tinkerling:I wish i had been there!!!