推 coldgoddess:Alan很棒~~ 10/14 22:35
推 Cathytung:Thanks, i also learn a lot from you~~ 10/15 10:19
我是今天去當timer的Alan
po一下我的感想：
今天的比賽真的很精彩，
大家都非常「敢」講，
雖然英文不怎麼流利、
發音不怎麼正確，
但是這些都沒有關係，
最重要的是我有十足的勇氣。
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我相信大家都是花了很多時間在準備這場比賽，
Tina Cathy Ivy Lisa都是萬中選一的高手，
你們在台上的表現都讓我由衷地佩服，
也讓我學到了很多的東西，
恭禧Tina Ivy 和Lisa.
You all are wonderful.
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Cathy, you really delivered a great speech.
Your content is very good and you also used
your body language.Being the first one makes
all the speaker nervous but you were very
confident.That is great.
But I want to give my humble suggestions：
The first one--eye contact, as the test
speaker,you seemed to stare at Sue only.
There are still other audiences listening
your speech, so you could turn your head or
shift your eyes toward the other person.
Let them know you care of them.
Then your tone was too flat.When you were
saying something interesting, you did not
exaggerate the part.Therefore, the audiences
would not feel it very funny.
Third, the strength is a bit weak.I guess
someone sitting far form you would not listen
very clearly and this made your speech less
attracting.If you adjust the position of
microphone, it would be better.
Last, one of the evaluators had mentioned,"
Never change the title till you are on the podium "
You should tell Cindy before you went to the podium
and it will make your speech more smoothly.
I am looking for your next speech.
Congratulation.
(第一次自己寫這種東西，如果有不對的地方，請大家告訴我)
Thank you
TM真的是一個從參與就可以學到東西的社團.
謝謝大家
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