※ 引述《siukei (異鄉人)》之銘言：
: National Taiwan University Wind Band
: The NTU Wind Band, currently one of the most ?? clubs in the National
: University, was founded on November 25, 1954 by a group of music-loving
How about "the most active"?
又 是不是少了"Taiwan"一字呀, I mean National "Taiwan" University...
: In the early days, concerts were held regularly when we were still a
: marching band. We then started the tradition of "Night of Chamber Music"
應該沒有所謂"開始傳統"吧!? 怪怪的耶...
室內樂之夜翻Concert of Chamber Music是不是就可以啦~
: in 1986. In 1988, our office was moved to the Second Student Activity
: Center, where members can enjoy better facilities for practice.
: Besides the "Night of Chamber Music", we also have a regular concert at
: the end of each semester.
這邊應該是翻譯的問題吧
前面說in the early days會定期舉辦 現在也說有定期舉辦
那不如說 從當初開始就定期舉辦 就好啦...
: Every once in a while, we hold tour performances during summer vacations.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
就說舉辦過或到過哪些地方辦巡迴吧 加了這句讀起來也怪怪的...
: Furthermore, we perform in different campus activities, hospital charity
: concerts, and schools. Which is why, we, the NTU Wind Band, is called
: one of the most active clubs in NTU.
^^^^^^ ㄟ 原來在這裡出現了 真歹勢~
又 應該是That is why吧!?
Which當肯定句主詞好像...
: In the past few years, we participated in various music activies: the
^^^^^^^^activitites
: International Wind Band Festival held in Chai-Yi; the Asian Pacific Wind
: Festial held in Hong Hong and Chai-Yi in 1996 and 2000 respectively.
^^^^ Kong 挑兩個小錯 :D
: In order to help our members improve their techniques of performing,
: besides regular practices each week, we hold a music camp every winter break.
嗯啊
Besides regular practice each week, we hold .... to improve our members...
這樣好像比較順...不然又像中式英文喔~
: We also have outstanding performances at the National Wind Band Contest,
: from 1987 onwards, we were granted the excellent/good grade for 14
: continuous years. In 2000, we even won the first prize.
降好像只有2000年拿過第一名 :~
: Although none of us are majoring in music, we have great interest and hold
這裡用進行式怪怪的耶... ^ 加s?
: deep passion in music making. We hope to provide everyone with pleasure
^^^^^^^^^^^^ What is "music making"?
How about "playing music"...
: and inspiration with our music.
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個人淺見啦 不一定對...
ㄟ 中文版本原來長怎樣啊?
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※ 編輯: chaconne 來自: 140.109.203.189 (12/25 16:08)