Re: [心得] editor怒了

[cadim (cadim)]

  In this study,  the electrochemical passive properties of AlxCoCrFeNi
  alloys in sulfuric acids at 20 - 65 oC were investigated
  by means of the potentiodynamic  polarization, EIS, and immersion weight
  loss tests. The Icorr results suggest that the corrosion current density
  increased with increasing Al content,
  As a result, at T >27 oC, "A", the ____factor, ａffected the __ more than
  Ea (), and Al is harmful to the corrosion resistance, owing to its
  inferior porous protection oxide films in these alloys.

因為有些地方不懂作者要表達的，所以試著改成這樣，請參考。



可能要注意說，科技英文要多用被動語態。所以有些論文編修不一定可以幫到你。

避免囉嗦的句子，一定要多用轉折詞。

文中有說道Ａ比Ｅａ更重要，這句話用中文講是通的，但是寫成英文很奇怪，
對什麼更重要，所以應該改成，影響什麼比較多。


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※ 編輯: cadim           來自: 122.126.131.75       (10/18 20:04)
推 cssula:大感激, 高下立現!
※ 編輯: cadim           來自: 122.126.131.75       (10/18 20:06)
→ flac:這樣改順多了 我建議原PO 可以去美加補老莫的修辭
→ flac:不是在打廣告 我覺得GMAT的修辭對於我後來寫英文論文有莫大
→ flac:的助益
推 osak:開頭 In this study是可以不要的