[問題] 關於一句英文句子

[pilipilifans (蛋塔)]

最近在作英文海報 但由於自己英文不太好

想上來請教關於一段文字打的是否正確

那段主要是要描述我們的實驗結果和一篇理論相關的paper是相符的

而我的英文描述是

  In ref [5], B. D. Esry have developed a method to calculate quantitative
"three-body recombination rates" for a "spin-polarized atomic gas" and our
results match their prediction.

其中" "是專有名詞 可以忽略不計

不知道上面這段話是否有文法上或者其他問題需要修改呢? 謝謝

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→ jerk:In Ref. [5], B. D. Esry developed a method to calculate
→ jerk:"three-body recombination rates" quantitatively for a
→ jerk:"spin-polarized atomic gas" and our results matched their
→ jerk:prediction.