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剛剛根版本上一位大大說切磋英文,真是野人獻曝,但由於下筆倉卒,尚望賢達不吝
指教錯誤跟缺失--今年指考英文作文 真是野人獻曝
When it comes to this issue,the first thought comes to my mind is my family
I would like to go abroad.I want to go to America as my first station with my
family owing to its expansive lands,where I can horse around all day long as w
ell as eat delicacy like a fish to indulge my self in indulgence.
If you ask me the reason why I am so indulgent,the authentic reason is that
I have ever suffer drom depression. There are many benefits to help me come
over the sympton.First of all,with the assitance from my parents,I can overcom
e what blocks me;then I will become more courageous,having a optimistic mind.
Additionally,I can forget the past miserable stuff intead of thinking myself
as the most unwealthful person. Having a bright mind is more significant.
The last the not the least,I obtain sufficient life experience derving from
frustration transcending what I do from success.Consquently, I realize how
to set myself straight that life is full of ups and downs.
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若猶泄泄以視之,是使中原數十年後無可禦敵之兵,亦無可充餉之銀
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