maybe better...
He doesn't like people to talk on the phone around him
while he is having a meal.
While he is having a meal, he doesn't like people
to talk on the phone around him.
※ 引述《poiuye (音樂,跳舞是一種生活)》之銘言：
: 請問第一句寫成以下方式 可以嗎?
: He doesn't like people who talk on the phone around him,
: ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
: when he is having a meal
: 謝謝^^
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