[Club] Timbrake

[timbrake (timbrake)]

【Sean's Club List】

ID：TIMBRAKE

Female/Male：Female

Career/School(optional)：NTUT

Birthday：76/10/26

支持陳信安的時間：Since he tried to enter NBA,I pround of him.

說說自己對陳信安的看法：

    although he is not good as three years ago,but I still feel he is the
top 1 in Taiwan,we can see a hope on him...
    now he try to help the team win not only by offense,but deffense..
he had been more and more smart!

 go sean go Taiwan

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推 seimo:would u mind if i fix your sentences?
→ seimo:u r supposed to insert "be-v" after I cuz "proud" is adj
→ seimo:also,with using although u cannot leave "but" there.
→ seimo:你的since是當因為.還是自從?..要小心喔
→ seimo:可以不用過去完成式.你可以用現在完成式就好..
→ seimo:不過他今天的確是跟卡達的forlorn hope
推 GarlicChen:討論起英文來了...XD
推 blue666666:那是因為錯得太誇張了...= =
推 tinybaby:是還漫誇張的Orz
推 seimo:其實有點中式.建議你習慣口語althougs1+v1+o1,s2+v2+o2.
→ seimo:讓自己不要有習慣but在那裡就好
推 sirius23:錯好多而且好誇張...= =
推 GarlicChen:完了 我好幾年沒唸英文文法了 所以沒有感覺 XD
推 koonhoba:這樣好糗捏 其實可以講中文
推 seimo:not only but那裡不確定可不可以這樣寫.我不會這樣用是真的ꨠ
推 timbrake:thanks^^
推 seimo:smarter and smarter...