作者P0970509782 (Ping-Pong)
看板TOEIC
標題[說寫] 有高手可以幫忙分析這兩句的句構嗎? 謝謝
時間Thu Sep 22 00:22:23 2011
這是我組員寫的句子 她給我看, 我覺得錯很多 結果不相信我就算了, 還罵我!!!
她只看專業人士的意見><
下面是原本她寫的, 我改得她都不相信.所以放上來希望有很詳細的答案@@
因為我會改 但是說不出為什麼@@
(我的國貿成績啊~~~~~~~~) 感激不盡><"""
1.
Recently, European begin trying to get used to drink tea
instead of daily coffees, becasue most want to realise
more chinese cultures than before, for doing business or for health.
2.
We focus on selling tea products, generated mainly in Taiwan
but seldom in china to Europe, providing different
types and qualities of the tea such as green , black or herbs.
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→ P0970509782 :我好難過== 09/22 00:30
→ shih :European began trying ->已經開始了吧? 09/22 08:58
→ shih :get used to drinking 09/22 09:01
→ shih :most of them ->會比較清楚 09/22 09:03
→ shih :products" "generated mainly 應該不用逗點 09/22 09:06
→ shih :in "C"hina to Europe 這裡的意思我看不懂,sorry 09/22 09:07
推 eleven1018 :既然他只相信專業人士，您在這兒問其實沒用。 09/22 17:53
→ eleven1018 :直接問您們的授課教師或她信的人才有用！ 09/22 17:54
→ eleven1018 :而且既然您有您的看法，先PO上您自己的想法再討論， 09/22 17:55
→ eleven1018 :才學得到東西，不然等於變相請網友幫您們改（作業） 09/22 17:56
→ P0970509782 :後來這就不是作業了~~~ 謝謝大家 09/22 20:50