Re: [英中] 47個單字，卻只有兩個標點符號的句子

[tengharold (RoadMan_A)]

※ 引述《hankxtina (Bristina Aguipears' Luv)》之銘言：
: The Contractor shall furnish contacts, connected its cables and raceway for
: remote visual and audible alarms on the annunciator of the fire detection and
: protection central control panel located in the central control room for one or
: more of the following status/alarm situations as a minimum.
: 承包商應為中央控制室內，火警探測與防護中央控制盤信號器，遠端視覺與聽覺警報器，
: 提供接點、連接電纜與滾道，下列一個或多個，作為最低限度之狀態/警報情況。
: 我的中文造詣真的很差，
: 加上這句子實在太長，
: 我真的不知該如何把它翻好，
: 麻煩大家救救我，
: 拜託拜託！＞＜
: 我還有一個疑問，
: 為何逗點後的connect會是過去式呀？
: 我覺得自己的文法認知應該沒什麼問題呀！＠＠...

我看起來是：
The Contractor shall [as a minimum],
1) furnish contacts [and]
2) connect [這裏接過去式感覺不通] its cables and raceway for remote visual and
audible alarms on the annunciator of the fire detection and protection central
control panel[, which is] located in the central control room[,] for one or
more of the following status/alarm situations.

請大家指點~

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→ l10nel:好奇，這種疑似文法不通的「偽」英文是哪裡來的？
推 noatu:我還以為工程文件常會這樣"落落長"(尤其是營建跟專利等)
→ noatu:不有個原則好像是 Contractor 用大寫 就不須加 the 不是嗎
→ noatu:*不過
推 meowlynn:將connected改為connecting會比較順嗎？
推 l10nel:感覺也是要說(by) connecting...，但這和 and connect 意思
→ l10nel:差不多（即使不完全相同），its 改 their 更好吧？
推 hankxtina:這是台電電廠規範的內容，可能是台灣人寫的吧！XD