[英中] 經濟評論文章

[kage01 (嗯)]

 原文：

    And austerity in a slump doesn’t just inflict vast suffering. There is
 growing evidence that it is self-defeating even in purely fiscal terms, as
 the combination of falling revenues due to a depressed economy and worsened
 long-term prospects actually reduces market confidence and makes the future
 debt burden harder to handle. You have to wonder how countries that are
 systematically denying a future to their young people — youth unemployment
 in Ireland, which used to be lower than in the United States, is now almost
 30 percent, while it’s near 50 percent in Greece — are supposed to achieve
 enough growth to service their debt.


 我的翻譯：

    在經濟衰退中採用緊縮政策，不僅造成巨大的痛苦。越來越多的證據顯示，即使單從
 財政數據來看，緊縮政策也會弄巧成拙。由經濟衰退導致的營收下降，加上長期經濟展
 望惡化，實質上降低了市場信心，並讓未來的債務負擔更為棘手。你或許會感到困惑：
 這些讓年輕人看不見未來的國家，像青年失業率比美國稍低的國家愛爾蘭，目前逼近
 百分之三十，而希臘則接近百分之五十，要如何達成足以支撐他們債務的經濟成長。

 有幾個問題 我不太確定想問大家

 fiscal term 這邊解讀成 財政數據對嗎

 falling revenue的 revenue可以說是營收嗎

 systematically denying a future 大家會怎麼翻這句話
 systematically 我原本想加「有系統的」 後來覺得中文怪怪的 所以沒加

 後面從
 You have to wonder~~~service their debt這段滿長的
 碰到這種長句 大家會怎麼調整語序呢？ 讓中文看起來比較順
 謝謝~



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※ 編輯: kage01          來自: 1.162.51.209         (04/23 15:48)
推 spacedunce5:fiscal terms是in terms of的片語變化;systematically
→ spacedunce5:我會說"從制度上即"
→ spacedunce5:原文是說愛爾蘭失業率是之前低於美國，現在比美國高
→ spacedunce5:原文破折號的地方我可能也用破折號或引號隔開
→ kage01:謝謝~