[中英] 請問我這樣翻譯是否恰當

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各位大大，小弟英文不是很流利，不知翻的是否恰當？請指教，謝謝


中文： 94學年度由水利系三年級轉入建築系二年級乙班


翻譯成  In 2005 academic year, transfer Department of Hydraulic Engineering

        second year  to  Department of Architecture second year second class.



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