Fw: [徵求] 求英文翻譯哪個比較好

[ECZEMA (曬黑的妳)]

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作者: lily123411 (Qna) 看板: Wanted
標題: [徵求] 求英文翻譯哪個比較好
時間: Fri Nov 10 14:16:25 2017

汪踢晚安

中文是
撒下諾言的種子，把我的真心埋下，期望能開出真誠的鮮花，把它奉獻給你。

然後我兩個朋友翻譯的
先說是意翻 不是單純翻譯

選手ㄧ

farming a land is charged with promise, within burying the true heart of mine.
 Until accepted result will be bloom sincerely flowers, to sacrifice for you.

選手二
Sowed the promise ,  within buried my honestly heart. Expect to bloom a flower
 ,dedicate it to  you , true as it could be.


覺得1好就1 2好就回2
https://i.imgur.com/95EtYkU.jpg

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推 Peter0616: 轉去 Translation 板應該可以獲得不少意見唷～
→ lily123411: 幫幫幫轉
推 ZoranGragic: 你最好
推 noitamiced: 2
推 cyd1991: 2
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※ 轉錄者: ECZEMA (69.255.19.33), 11/11/2017 05:05:21
→ ECZEMA: 可以翻成下句嗎? A seed of promise is sowed sincerely
→ ECZEMA: with my heart, and wish it the blossom of integrity
→ ECZEMA: presented to you one day.
→ Dogmeat: I sow the seeds of promise; plant my true heart's
→ Dogmeat: intention. Await honesty to blossom; to dedicate to
→ Dogmeat: you.
推 spacedunce5: 要翻出意思勝過文字是吧？那就：Sowing the seeds of
→ spacedunce5: my promise, planting my deep affection, I await
→ spacedunce5: the blooming flowers of sincerity, so that I can
→ spacedunce5: give them to you.
推 cloki: 原PO只是問哪個比較好的話感覺是2
→ cloki: 但其實兩個感覺都有點亂來...
推 spaciba: Spacedunce大翻真好
推 YiYaochAng: 是我英文不好嗎……選手一號二號都看不太懂想幹嘛。
推 spacedunce5: 不是你英文不好