[問題] 唱Arch Enemy的歌

[KILLER7 (七面殺手)]

錄Arch Enemy 的 The day you died，
音樂開很小聲，
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RVwkNoLirPg
請對deathcore/hardcore有了解的先進們，
幫我聽聽看有哪些需要改進的地方，
謝謝。

歌詞
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The Day You Died

A precious child with innocent mind
Born to suffer, in this life or for another

So hopeless and relentless falls this remorseless day
The dark remains of a violent world

They day you died my tears ran dry
I feel you, I hear you echo in my soul
I failed you, I miss you so
The day you died echoes in my soul

This world’s on fire – turned its back on us
A lost horizon left behind

So hopeless and relentless falls this remorseless day
The dark reality of a hostile world

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→ t2162050:看不到
是MP3，我有確認過，點下去就會播放了。
→ cmkin:@@...真的沒辦法開耶~
我已經把它傳到youtube上了，網址已換上，謝謝。
推 cmkin:氣音有點多 感覺可以再壓紮實一點 顆粒會比較好聽
謝謝你的建議~ 我會再試試看!
※ 編輯: KILLER7         來自: 114.38.22.32         (01/18 08:02)
推 t2162050:用力的點可以再往下一點點 力度強一點讓顆粒更肥美
→ t2162050:如果以原唱的味道來說的話
謝謝建議~！ 我會去調整，試試能否唱出Angela的味道~
※ 編輯: KILLER7         來自: 114.38.28.181        (01/19 22:59)