Re: [書信] 麻煩各位幫我看一下信件內容.感謝你們

[greattimsky (Mr.Tim)]

小弟也來練習一下，希望版上大大幫忙看看有無該改進的地方：

Dear Nash,

Thanks for the new order. Please check below reply and attached PI.

I-251: This item is no longer available, please delete it off of this PO.

I-817: Please revise the q'ty to 48pcs for full carton.

I-691: You list this item twice, please confirm the correct q'ty is 100pcs
       or 200pcs. (我習慣是請客戶直接確認要訂多少數量)

Thanks and Regards,

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