Re: [轉寄] The Three O'clock Wind

[dale (冰城城主)]

※ 引述《Astrophil (apple)》之銘言：
: All windows of glass become something that is made of air,
: and the three o'clock comes in the place that other's (?) won't dare to come.
: (I'm not so sure about what "other's" means.)
        Because it should really be "others" --
        the original author made a mistake.

        By the way, posts prefixed with [轉寄] are not meant to be
        exceptionally good poems.  I'm simply forwarding these
        [hopefully interesting] poems to promote poem-writing, i.e.,
        to show that poems written by foreigners are not _that_ good --
        thence encouraging people to write.

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推 ianjelly:I appreciate your purpose.XD
推 ianjelly:若是節奏感強點文法不是問題如Hopkins 但
→ ianjelly:節奏感強點會更好^^
推 dale:G. M. Hopkins?
推 dale:嗯嗯，我很喜歡他。:)