Re: [創作] Practice S

[PowLluimniz (波西米亞)]

  A very cute poem. A very interesting practice.
  Aptly named, aptly maneuvered, good preparation.

  The rhythms and the sounds well performed for
  the practice of "S," and the action blended
  neatly with the scenery. The use of stoppings
  was impressive. No major flaws, but that's all.

  The only question I have is that if you need
  to capitalize the final "s" as in cat"S" (6).

  Though radically different, some short poems
  by e. e. cummings and Williams Carlos Williams
  may interest you.


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推 catcatcatcat:I just want to emphasize the S, so I
→ catcatcatcat:capitalize the final "s". But I am not
→ catcatcatcat:sure whether it makes the poem better or
→ catcatcatcat:not:P  Just for fun!
推 dale:For an experienced reader, the final "S" would
推 dale:be noticed -- capitalised or not.  :)