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創作動機: 跟korn31910兄交流了一些想法 根據我對他原作的解讀 創作了一個延伸的詮釋. 把一些像是racial discrimination, social class, fate等的議題 以貓咪作主角 用寫景的方式加以烘托. HOPE YOU LIKE IT. Locked and crippled In the dungeons enshrouded In a haze of rusty blue and red, Those in tabby, shabby patterns Utter not a single word but fluently eat And sleep — the sole language they repeat. With eyes as blanched As the blank hollows in limbo, They behold the young, Alas, so young and just young, Gracefully peacock down the street, Half gliding with their velvet tails Swaying like a tiger's prowling trails. Mumbling a blues-workingman song These in torn blue and red Start to be and never cease to be, And they harp on how expensive And noble an American shorthair Is destined and meant to forever be. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 140.122.218.79
korn31910:我覺得比起原作精緻許多 畫面也更鮮明! 163.14.241.96 04/24 16:26
lm124194:恩恩 畫面很棒 140.120.225.25 04/24 17:16