[分享] Fred Chappell, Narcissus and Echo

[spacedunce5 (CJ)]

Shall the water not remember           Ember
my hand's slow gesture, tracing above     of
its mirror my half imaginary            airy
portrait? My only belonging          longing
is my beauty, which I take              ache
away and then return, as love             of
teasing playfully the one being     unbeing.

whose gratitude I treasure           Is your
moves me. I live apart                 heart
from myself, yet cannot                  not
Live apart. In the water's tone       stone?
that brilliant silence, a flower        Hour
whispers my name with such slight     light:
moment, it seems filament of air,       fare
the world becomes cloudswell.          well.

--
james bond (verb)
to commit a difficult or seemingly impossible act with the utmost efficiency,
achieving all goals with no personal loss, maintaining a cool, calm demeanor,
and topping it all off with class, a cheeky catchphrase, and, if at all
possible, the occasional explosion and some hot sex.

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◆ From: 61.228.182.237
推 celestial09:右邊的註腳是啥阿? 看半懂 XD
※ 編輯: spacedunce5     來自: 61.228.182.237       (04/12 23:28)
→ spacedunce5:look up "Narcissus" in Mythology
推 celestial09:Narcissus liar XD
→ spacedunce5:?
※ 編輯: spacedunce5     來自: 140.112.7.59         (04/13 19:53)
推 julians:the right column refers to the speech
→ julians:of Echo, or, precisely, echoing sounds
推 celestial09:interesting :D
→ celestial09:I never read a lot formal poems and
→ celestial09:am not familiar of their styles.
→ celestial09:Guess I'll explore more in the
→ celestial09:future.^^  It's fun!
→ celestial09:opps, 應該是"with" 我打太快了 :S
→ celestial09:好恐怖的錯誤 呃 (抖!)  XDD
※ 編輯: spacedunce5     來自: 61.228.183.11        (04/13 23:50)
→ spacedunce5:this style was new to me too