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I hate jealousy The killer of true friendship I hate jealousy The opposite of beauty I hate jealousy The blocker of human progress hurting me deeply And I start to understand how hard it is to survive without jealousy while 99% of others possess it subtly Hide it under a smile in their ancient survival trait Beating others down subtly Shocked to realize that the other 1% exists even in me Loneliness mocking, friendship breaking, Redeemed as deviance Opposing jealousy lonesomely heart injured, soul wounded Fighting the black, the common human trait The world turns a bit grey as the morning breaks None the pure to be with This jealous semester leads to an endless journey And the child sits on the boat, paddling longing and longing, trying to make the surrouding friendly Desire of pureness unsatisfied, earnesty rejected, sobbing dismayfully. ps. A riminder of those people I met in new school when I was young. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 123.193.24.253 ※ 編輯: celestial09 來自: 123.193.24.253 (05/26 00:20)
Octavio:In between love and friendship, 114.40.199.44 05/26 02:39
Octavio:jealousy is always vicious poison. 114.40.199.44 05/26 02:41
Octavio:有幾個地方要修正一下 true, possess, 114.40.199.44 05/26 02:54
Octavio:earnest 114.40.199.44 05/26 02:55
celestial09:Thanks^^ btw, I have question 123.193.24.253 05/26 11:44
celestial09:regarding earnesty. Seems like it's 123.193.24.253 05/26 11:44
celestial09:not a formal word, but I saw it 123.193.24.253 05/26 11:44
celestial09:before. 123.193.24.253 05/26 11:44
TimManu:The speaker seems hurt badly 118.168.204.68 05/26 14:05
※ 編輯: celestial09 來自: 123.193.24.253 (05/26 16:26)