作者celestial09 (Koouos :D)
看板poetry
標題[創作] jealousy
時間Wed May 26 00:18:50 2010
I hate jealousy
The killer of true friendship
I hate jealousy
The opposite of beauty
I hate jealousy
The blocker of human progress
hurting me deeply
And I start to understand how hard it is
to survive without jealousy
while 99% of others possess it subtly
Hide it under a smile
in their ancient survival trait
Beating others down subtly
Shocked to realize that the other 1% exists even in me
Loneliness mocking,
friendship breaking,
Redeemed as deviance
Opposing jealousy lonesomely
heart injured, soul wounded
Fighting the black,
the common human trait
The world turns a bit grey as the morning breaks
None the pure to be with
This jealous semester leads to an endless journey
And the child sits on the boat, paddling
longing and longing,
trying to make the surrouding friendly
Desire of pureness unsatisfied, earnesty rejected,
sobbing dismayfully.
ps. A riminder of those people I met in new school when I was young.
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