Re: [創作] Jealousy

[TimManu (Silent Power)]

※ 引述《celestial09 (Koouos :D)》之銘言：
:  I hate jealousy
:  The killer of ture friendship
:  I hate jealousy
:  The opposite of beauty
:  I hate jealousy
:  The blocker of human progress
:  hurting me deeply
:  And I start to understand how hard it is
:  to survive without jealousy
:  while 99% of others possess it subtly
:  Hide it under a smile
:  in their ancient survival trait
:  Beating others down subtly
:  Shocked to realize that the other 1% exists even in me
:  Loneliness mocking,
:  friendship breaking,
:  Redeemed as deviance
:  Opposing jealousy lonesomely
:  heart injured, soul wounded
:  Fighting the black,
:  the common human trait
:  The world turns a bit grey as the morning breaks
:  None the pure to be with
:  This jealous semester leads to an endless journey
:  And the child sits on the boat, paddling
:  longing and longing,
:  trying to make the surrouding friendly
:  Desire of pureness unsatisfied, earnesty rejected,
:  sobbing dismayfully.
: ps. A riminder of those people I met in new school when I was young.


  Desire of pureness unsatisfied, earnesty rejected,
  sobbing dismayfully.

  為了這句我上下文再看了幾次，把自己想成在船上划著槳的小孩，只得到:

  渴望著未滿足的純真，被否定的真誠以及憂傷的啜泣。

  好矛盾的前後關係~~~也google不到什麼資料....XD




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→ raphaella:原 po 應該正水深火熱吧，最好是誤啦
推 celestial09:原PO是指Tim還是我阿  r大美女 XDD
→ celestial09:to Tim: 當然google 不到 因為是我自
→ celestial09:己亂寫的 XDD
→ celestial09:好像只有最後那句寫得比較傳神
→ celestial09:其他就是  口語啦  隨便糊出來的XDD
→ TimManu:我以為這一系列都是 Langston Hughes...XD
推 celestial09:Of course not.^^ I don't even know
→ celestial09:who's Langston before CJ told me.
→ celestial09:創作就是創作  跟分享作品是兩回事^^
→ raphaella:大美女是我妹，我不是啦，收回收回
推 celestial09:喔  妳的心很美阿 ^^   XDD
→ raphaella:你匠子當眾誇獎我我要羞了