[創作] Grave

[hahastarr (漫步中的哈哈星人)]

I dive into silence
in the silence I sigh
with bittersweet bubbles
for as long as I like


I dive into darkness
in the darkness I cry
with overwhelming shadows
for as deep as I like


I dive into winter
in the coldness I write
with shabby bloody chapters
for as wild as I like


I dive into fire
in the heat I decide
with unspeakable pleasure
for ever here I lie




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推 korn31910:WOW! Beautiful rhymes!
→ korn31910:And clever repitition!
推 spacedunce5:almost best original poem i've seen
→ spacedunce5:here!!!!!
推 celestial09:Great! Tzuning :D  Wonderful~
推 korn31910:I agree with spacedunce 5, absolutely
→ korn31910:The most original poem here!
→ hahastarr:*bow*
推 cielliao:awesome!!