[創作] This was the night

[spacedunce5 (CJ)]

This was the night
I let my future slip through my hands
 - or what might have been my future, a future.

By streetlight and nocturnal quietude,
we parted by your dorm, you
carefree, and me hesitant.

I was hesitant too long.

And now I can only say
that we were never meant to be,
that it was only a carnal desire
 - comforting excuses.

        by streetlight and nocturnal quietude
        i was hesitant too long
        we parted by your dorm
        my future slipped through my hands
                and it was never meant to be.

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i almost thought i lost this poem!
lucky i found it, haha.

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計畫趕不上變化  戀愛衝不破阻礙
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推 hahastarr:good that u found it so we could read
推 celestial09:I actually think this structure and
→ celestial09:repetition is beautiful :D
→ celestial09:And glad that you found someone XD
→ celestial09:maybe give it a try? XD
→ celestial09:Take chance buddy! XD
→ spacedunce5:this was a long time ago (fail