Re: [試譯] 夜雨寄北

[kamadevas (蔗尾蜂房)]

A northbound letter in a rainy night

If you ask me when I will return,
My dear gentleman, I am not sure.
Now I am among the alps of Ba
As autumn rain exceeds the pond's shores
Alas, if someday we, by the westward window,
Brighten the candle together with wick scissors,
We will definitely chat about my rainy nights
Among the alps of Ba for sure


我也來試譯看看^^;

君問歸期未有期
巴山夜雨漲秋池
何當共剪西窗燭
卻話巴山夜雨時


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※ 編輯: kamadevas       來自: 68.51.75.179         (03/04 02:21)
推 spacedunce5:共剪西窗燭是wick scissors嗎我中文不
→ spacedunce5:好？
→ kamadevas:應該講trim the candle wick,但我想強調
→ kamadevas:剪燭是為了把燭光弄亮以徹夜聊天
※ 編輯: kamadevas       來自: 68.51.75.179         (03/06 01:41)
※ 編輯: kamadevas       來自: 68.51.75.179         (03/06 01:41)
推 spacedunce5:感覺有點卡卡的，是voiceless stops
→ spacedunce5:用太多嗎？